When He Turned Red: Short Poem

When He Turned Red: Short Poem

When He Turned Red: Short Poem

When He Turned Red.

White as the clouds,
he once was, till he
turned red like a burning
furnace.

Like a florescent bulb,
she once glowed, but his
sizzling red effect
made her as wishy-
washy as an old grave.

Since he turned red,
she had been his daily
sacrifice; but today,
there’s nothing
left of her to offer;
her eyes are staring at
vagueness;
her breath has become
a part of the wind.

Written and Performed by Viano Dee
Instrumental: Sharp Senses by Ugonna Onyekwe (Royalty Free Beat).

Related poem: Once Upon a Shredded Dream

About When He Turned Red

When He Turned Red is a short but deep poem about a relationship gone sour. It’s about domestic violence resulting to death.

As I wrote this poem, I remembered some facebook posts I read from a young lady some months back. She kept speaking about her boyfriend had been maltreating her; beating her and even pulling her hair off her scalp.

I also remember she warned ladies to stop dating “bad boys” because they have no idea what they are asking for. She used herself as example.

Anyway, she spoke about how she ran away from him but he kept finding her and how it seemed she was putting everyone’s life in danger. I can’t recall where she was precisely but I think it was Chicago (again I’m not very sure).

I don’t even remember her name— I didn’t know her but many people advised her to go to the police— she was frightened.

Again, I can’t recall if she did. If she did, they probably didn’t take her seriously. If she didn’t, she was probably scared of being racially profiled (she was black). Or maybe she was scared of him— I don’t know. But one day, I woke up to the news that she was gone— he had finally killed her.

Her breath had become a part of the wind.

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Viano Dee

Viano Dee is a non niche blogger, poet, songwriter and a hardcore romantic who believes that life is something that we all should be positive about. She writes about life generally with the hope that positive change will occur even if it's just in one person. Her write-ups could take any form: poetry, articles, and even songs in ways that'll inspire you, resonate with you, or tell a story while keeping you both informed and entertained.

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2 years ago

This is a really interesting poem. Adding the audio made it even better for people like me who like listening to poems more than reading 

StressedMum
2 years ago

What an emotional poem it certainly gets to you and the story of that poor young woman so sad 

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Reply to  StressedMum
2 years ago

Stressedmum, it does. Really sad.

Mandi Morrison
2 years ago

It is a very poignant poem about anger from the man. Really emotionally written.

christopher mitchell 🌎✈️
2 years ago

I don’t have enough poetry in my life these days, so this was nice and refreshing to read. 

Geraline Batarra
2 years ago

Oh my god… That was so tragic…! I didn’t know things could end that way. I always had a guess about these kinds of relationships being the bf was just to attached and possesive, but to actually kill her…? Oh my. 😭😢

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Reply to  Geraline Batarra
1 year ago

Honestly. It is sad.

Liz Santos
2 years ago

Nice share.. I haven’t read too may poems lately, but this one strikes the emotion.

amadi
2 years ago

this is a very good poem…as it is been said you don’t know the value of a thing till you loose it.

Alexandra Cook
2 years ago

That was beautifully written, I love it and the story behind this poem.

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Reply to  Alexandra Cook
1 year ago

Thanks a lot, Alexandra.

Sabrina Must
2 years ago

This poem captures the ugly truth of abusive relationships. Although the ending is tragic, this is a powerful reminder to take care of each other and recognize the telling signs of abuse before its too late.

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Reply to  Sabrina Must
1 year ago

Very true, Sabrina.

Katherine
2 years ago

Wow 

This poem is like a  reminder for me to be cautious about the kind of friends I keep and relate with 

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Reply to  Katherine
1 year ago

Yeah. You need to stay away from toxic people.

Elizabeth O
2 years ago

That was a sad ending for a troubled lady. If she had gone to the police maybe things would turn out good. Hope she finds peace now. That was a lovely poem.

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Reply to  Elizabeth O
1 year ago

Thanks a lot Elizabeth.

Kate the Great
2 years ago

That was indeed a sad ending of an abusive relationship. Keep an eye on this kind of things!

Alexandra Cook
2 years ago

This is such a great but sad poem. The message behind it was very tragic. We should be really keep an eye with these things.

Yomi Spontaneous
2 years ago

Thank you sop much for using the poem to pass such a strong message that is really affecting a lot of relationships right now. I love the advise to ladies: let’s not wish for those bag boys we see in movies but pray for those who will value us.

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